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Thursday, July 19, 2007

The Beginnings Of A Tale

The beginnings of a tale always lead us into the unknown. What is there? We shall only find out if we start the journey. The thoughts flood out as the pen moves. They come with sitting. More shall come with the words. This is exactly how my journey into the past began.
As I sat there with the animals gathered around me in a wave of little furry faces, I began to tell my tale. They're eyes watched in awe as the past unfolding before them was borne yet again. For we all know that the past happens only once, and that it can not be chosen like the path that we walk down. For at the time you choose that path you do not know what lies ahead for you along that path for it is the future. But the second later that you choose to go down that path that choice becomes part of the past.
Now back to the tale; shall we?
As I closed my eyes and imagined all of it just as if it had happened nearly a minute ago. For it is not just a legend I was there.
Long ago it seems that I was here, but this has never happened. In the time of reflection it feels as if it was at the very beginnings of this place, now known as Ducnan. Before though when the very first humans came here it was known as Bloodikrivin or Blood River. There were many a blood trickle in this place and since then has forgotten its true start for all that were here since the beginning before they came and took charge are now few. The Sky, though remembers that time of great blood shed and of many an Elfin and Dragon that were slain. So, though it is weary for it to played a part in the battle once every year it sheds its remembrance with red storms.
They all shuddered in remembering the previous year where some of they're family members had been caught in that dreadful, horrifying storm and had relayed their story of being trapped and the faint images that they could remember of what they saw.
The humans they choose, though to be ignorant of the signs and have christened that particular day of the year storm day. I mean how bland and ignorant can they be. Stupid humans, it seems that not even one of them can see past that it is not just a storm, for I know that if they chose to look past just the word storm that they could see. They even just push the bloody memories of battle behind them, and tell none of it to their offspring ( at least those who are left, who were there). Whereas we can not forget or push back the memories they flood to us in abudance. While we are sleeping their visions torment us. The one that torments me most is the vision of seeing my comrad fall from flight in pain. The humans to me ever since that day have been labeled evil for they did not shoot him with a weapon they used dark magic that day to gain control of this abundant land. If I ever meet one such human that is not caught up in deep evil and who actually knows about what happened that day of great blood shed (that is how we always refer to it for its true name is stooped in evil and we would fall lame if anyone in our presence uttered this name) may just be able to convince that they are not all bad.
In my case and in my many years of living I have never met such a person in this land that I can now no longer leave.......

14 comments:

Imagination said...

Hey everybody!!!
This is a new story that I have started. I am exciting and I hope that I finish it . I will try to add on to it gradually when I want to get my creative juices flowing. Enjoy! Hope that you like it ?!?!??

Imagination said...

sorry I meant excited not exciting

Dark Ravyn said...

man bekah..........u seriously amaze me sometimes. that.was.good. bravo, and encore!!!!

Benjamin said...

GreenDragonTHAT WAS AMASING!!!!!!!!!!! can u finnish it? it really was good! i want to know what happens!!! lol ok getting to hyper... better hurry before i lose it! lol... wait... to late lol

Imagination said...

Hey Everyone,
Thanks, I am glad that you like it.
Yes, I will keep adding to it as I can. So I guess that you will just have to check back to see if I have written more.
Thank you,
Yet again.

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Go to the toons section
and then click on Strong Bad Email
Once at the Strong bad email scroll down till you find one that is called "radio"
It is next to one that is called part time job.

haaaaaaam said...

wooooooo. u a writer?!?!? DUDE!!! AWESOME!!!

Imagination said...

Yep I guess that you could call me a writer I mean I really enjoy it.
To me it is fun to explore the world of my thoughts and to let it out in many ways.
I will be writing more of it of course.

Anonymous said...

wow ur really creative!!! just like Kylie!!! awesomeness!!

Imagination said...

thank you thank you.
Hold the applause.

No I am not really like that I just thought that it would be fun to say it for once.

This Is Hip. said...

bekha........that was the best beging of a book i have ever read!! and iv read alot of books. miss u like somthing that misses someone. bye ike ~

This Is Hip. said...

bekha finish it publish it and get rich!!! GO BEKHA!!!!!!! WOOOOOOO

ike ~

Imagination said...

Hey Thank you thank you.
Glad that you enjoy my inspired mind.
And just to let some others out there I have just started another story, but this one is going to be a short story, that is I am hoping that my mind can make it into one.

Imagination said...

That is of course why my blog is called my mind.....

GnNLeidenfrost said...

A wise man once said that "one who begins a journey never arrives unless one continues to move forward." It is my ardent hope that you continue this exciting journey of words and continue moving forward, carried along in the wonderful creativity God has blessed you with. Along the way you will enjoy exploring the world of make believe. You might find however, that you will only arrive at the end of such a journey when the truths of your tale begin to touch the place where we live...when they begin to find a way to enter our world and change us for the better. I am confident you will find such truths and weave them into your tale.

Onward then sojourner, your travels await!