here's the first one:
The November Winds,
The Great Cat, &
The Enchantment
The blustery cold of the
November winds waits in silence
Like a great cat crouching
About to jump upon its
Prey.
It waits thus like a great cat
While the band strikes
Upon the first note of
Music enchanted by spells
Of long ago.
And as that first note is
Played...
That is when the GREAT CAT
Chooses the prey and pounces
Upon its prey of living souls.
With its pounce the Great Cat
Gains speed and before it knows
It is running in a whirlwind
Of hopes in dreams that
Reverberate off of the musicians as they
Unbound the enchantment of the music.
And as the Great Cat continues its speed up
Chase to find the lost prey
The enchanted music keeps its time
By chasing its own prey
But the Great Cat
Dissipates to become that
Cold November wind that we all
Bravely face.
The musicians speed up until
POOF!! All disappear with the
End of the GREAT CAT.
the spells weaved into the
Music are set free allowing
All to know their beauty!
that one was written on Nov. 28 on my way to band. yes, I play flute.
Ok there is only one more, but it is long, kinda:
Dreams!
Among the Stars
Among the stars,
When we look up into its vastness
Does it make you want to fly?
To be among its clouds, moons, and stars.
So many dreams...
So little time
God created the time and space
That we can dream about
These things...
That we can even dream at all!
Dreams of flying, dreams of stars,
Dreams of being whatever you wish.
So many dreams....
Dreams of becoming a famous artist,
Dreams of becoming a famous author.
Yes, some will come true...
If we put our minds to it
But some dreams however far out
However random,
Are the ones that our minds wrap around.
They are the ones in which we see
Ourselves
Floating, gliding, surfing through the
Dream world.
Wafting in the wind,
Becoming the wind.
Now not all revolve around the sky.
But if you were to think about your
Far out, Not normal, Dream world dream
It most likely involves nature in some
Way.
Maybe not, but is does as far as I
Know.
Nature which includes the science
Of it all.
God created the natural world around
Us...
To see, to enjoy, to preserve.
You may dream
Among the stars.
Or under them,
But in either case.
God's mighty, Powerful, Omnipotent....
So many more AMAZING names that we
Could put under His name.
A whole book could we fill, no even
More than that could we fill with all
The names that we use to describe Him. His mouth uttered one word at
The beginning, and after that more and
More.
And did this natural world did
He create.
And this universe did He also create.
So many dreams...
So much time, maybe you think so
Little.
But either way there still is time
To dream
Among the stars.
Thats it, I hope that you enjoyed it. I like to write!! Its fun as long as your work pays off. in other words that whatever you write in the end you like and others do to.
Poetry, other writings ,pictures, and various other things that come upon me...
Wednesday, December 5, 2007
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12 comments:
*speachless... those are awsome, i like the last 1 best... but i dont like dreams... other than that its awsome lol
Hey thanks!!
Glad that you liked them.
np about not liking dreams ben
glad you liked the poem though!
It depends on what you dream about and if it ends up being good or turning into a bad dream.
I have had some freakish dreams.
But then again I think that probably we all have some more than others.
And Auberne' glad that you liked them so much as to call them 100% awesome!!
u r amazing bekah....
OMG!!!! i looooove the among the stars one!!! i seriously looove it!!
GOd gave u some amazingly awesome talent!!!
hey would u mind if i printed it out and put it my diary??? i looove it!!!!!! :D
hey would u mind if i printed it out and put it my diary??? i looove it!!!!!! :D
hey would u mind if i printed it out and put it my diary??? i looove it!!!!!! :D
hey Brit,
sure feel free, go ahead and print it out and put it in your diary!! I am glad that you liked it....
I have written a few more, but they are presents for ppl so I will put them up here after Christmas.
Thanks everybody!! Glad that you like poetry too!!!!
Merry Christmas!!! :P
one more MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!!!
Enjoy life!!!
thanks sooo much!! and merry christmas!! i just got done watchinf "christmas shoes" that is the saddest movie EVER!!! i cried sooo much!!!
Merry Christmas!!! Everyone its in 3 days!!! Wow!! came fast!!
I have some new poems that'er newer than these!!
I am going to post them!! :P
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