written 03-19-08
Midnight Mystery Lady
Her midnight black hair billows all around
Her angelic face with its angular
Perfection.
She sweeps through the lands which have a
Poverty stricken population and weeps
For her people.
Knowing that she can not do very much
For them.
But as she flies over the land full of the
Spoiled and wealthy,
The land of those who only truly care for
Themselves-
She stays and keens for its people knowing
That these are the only people whom she can
Not help at all.
Her loving hands care for the sick and those
Who can not help themselves...
Her eyes give strength to the weak and dying
So that they may move on...to either peace
Or life.
She is the helper,
But she can help only those who
Will accept it.
She is the mystery behind
The veil, the masterpiece that has
Yet to be given a name.
But there she is...
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what do you think?
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6 comments:
AWESOME!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!
Auberne' Ancalimon @-`---
do you have any other thoughts?
I am in the process of submitting this poem to the magazine...
btw the magazine is called Teen Ink
and yes there is a website...
i LOVE that poem!!!!!!!!!!!u sooooo need to turn it in!!!!
thanks, friend...
I have to finish up I have everything pretty much, I just need to address the envelope, stick the stuff in it, seal the envelope, and mail it off....
I am going to go find the address to the place now. :)
are there any other poems that you think I should submit?
Should I submit "The Rain's Melody"?
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