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Wednesday, April 30, 2008

A New Poem.... Let me know what you think.

She, the lonely wanderer
Coasted through the pass,
And on her ghostly form I saw
A gown of pale colors and hues
Mostly of blue,
It shivered about her presence as if it were
Not there.

She, the lonely wanderer
Was herself pale
And when she looked up she startled me,
For the only thing that was not pale about
Her-
Was her deep sea eyes.
They stare at me and transfixed me there
I stood.
They seemed to contain other worlds, and
Times and places; than that of my own.
They were deep and never endingless-
Fair, but yet dark-
Smooth, but yet rough, for all the crags that they contained-
And there I was frozen in my dream for all
Time.

She, the lonely wanderer
Stood over me like a guardian angel.
For though her beauty could make any man
Run into chaos, and turmoil, and strife,
For all falling
For her, wars would rage, and they
Would all be at loss, for she would never
Love any man.
She was my great protector, and a fierce
Warrior Queen. She had only look them in the
Eye, and then they would run in terror at
Some awful thing.

I did not know how such a thing was
Done,
For I had made connection, and her eyes had not
Been unforeboding terror and horror to me.
They had told a never ending story of
Worlds unknown to me.
But maybe it is because they are her
Enemies, and I am not.

She, the lonely wanderer.
Coasts through my dreams.

6 comments:

Ladywillowgrey Ancalimon said...

I LOVE IT!!!!! I THINK IT'S MA FAVORITE EVER!!!!!! VERY LOTR!

Auberne' Ancalimon @-`---

Imagination said...

thats funny, glad that you liked it.

Imagination said...

This poem doesn't have a title....
Can you think of One??

Ladywillowgrey Ancalimon said...

Hmm... The Lonely Wanderer? Or Wandering Woman? Just ideas.

Auberne' Ancalimon @-`---

Imagination said...

thank you for your input

Imagination said...

Formulating a new poem in my head
I will give you a hint @ it
The title:

Journeys On The Back Of A Bicycle